- This is better
- I like the change of pace in the performance part
- Is that the right font?
- Is the ending a bit slow and the shot too long?
To improve-
- Maybe include a slow zoom at the beginning of the performance part
- For the typed email, maybe use the font you are using in your ancillary
Focus Group Feedback
Amy
- I like the text on the screen because it made it more clear what was happening
- I like how there are less coffee shop shots so there are more that actually relate to the song
- The lip syncing was very good and in time and made it seem like the actress is singing
To improve-
- You could colour grading to balance the shots -e.g: the shots in the field are really sharp and bright compared to the shots in the bedroom. To make it easier on the eye between the two different shots
- I think that you could have more interesting transitions, such as cutting on the beat
Rhiannon
- I love the use of the diegetic sound at the beginning
- I like that there are more shots of her playing guitar
To improve-
- More performance shots would be good
Ben
- It fits the music really well
- It tells a good story
To improve-
- Have text when she gets the email in the coffee shop so it is easy to understand the message of the email
Joe
- I like the text and how it was like it was typing
- I like the more shots of her playing guitar
From this feedback, we now need to:
- Change the ending so that it is less abrupt - relate it to RMAs
- Change the font for the typed email to relate it to the ancillaries
- Add more interesting transitions
- Colour grade the shots so that they flow together better
No comments:
Post a Comment