Final Edit

Personal Constructive Criticism

After watching my final outcome, there were many factors that could be improved upon:

• The shots needed to have flowed better, as the obvious cuts between them makes it more jumpy and does not look professional
• The actors were not enthusiastic enough, with the lip syncing very hard to distinguish, making it look fake and not genuine
• Both actors' costumes were the same throughout the whole video, which made it look unrealistic, especially as one of the main focuses was about different time frames and flashbacks

Overall, I was not satisfied with the quality of the final outcome, and I will take these factors which did not work well into consideration. In my next production, I will specifically improve upon these to make a higher standard piece of work.