- I like the shots where it goes really fast as it creates differentiation from your other shot duration's and makes the video more engaging
- Good pace- keeps people engaged and want to watch more
- I really like the concept of the smoke flares and how you have made the colours a continuous link throughout your main and ancillary task, its a subtle connection that creates good links
To improve-
- Maybe include a bigger variety of shot types to show off more skills and knowledge
- Smoke flares could appear more repetitive if they are shown at all choruses, try and link of a way to break that down - lip syncing, for example
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