Second Draft Music Promo

For our second draft, we took into consideration our feedback from our first draft and filmed more shots of the main protagonist playing her guitar, and writing lyrics. We then took our the irrelevant parts of her in the cafe and added these in instead. 

When she is reading the emails, I had an idea to add text next to her as she is reading, to also show the audience what the email says so they can understand clearer. After getting feedback on this, I may include this, however we did reshoot the parts with the email to make them easier to read. 

We filled in the blank gaps we had in our first draft, however this meant the shots we had did not fill the whole song, so I cut the instrumental at the end, which is something we thought of doing anyway if we did not have enough footage.