Saturday, 10 March 2018

Audience Feedback - First Draft Magazine Advertisement

Teacher's Feedback:
  • Make the font for the reviews smaller
  • Level out the reviews so they are together
  • Make the image of the girl bigger as there is a lot of empty space

Focus Group Feedback:

Amy
  • I like the use of the guitar as it links well to the music video
  • Having the same picture of the girl and her guitar is good as it is clear they are linked together
To improve-
  • It would be more interesting to have a more variation of colours

Rhiannon
  • The synergy between all three products is really clear
  • Having the main protagonist as the main focus is effective
To improve- 
  • Maybe add more colour to be more eye catching

Ben
  • I like that it's really clear what it's all about
  • It looks really good as a product
To improve- 
  • The girl needs to be more saturated

Joe
  • I like how the white font contrasts with the background
  • I like how a similar image is used for both the digipak and the advertisement

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