Third Draft Music Promo

For the third draft of our music promo, I used the feedback we received from both our teacher and our focus group to improve it-

• I removed some of the shots that focused on her taking off and putting on her jumper and coat, as I agreed that these were unnecessary. 
• I found shots of her playing the guitar which we filmed on the first day but did not include, so I used these to replace the unneeded shots. 
• To make the beginning of the song more like real-life, I added the ambient sound of typing when she types on her phone. 
• In terms of the email, I added text to the shot of her reading the acceptance email, and added key frames to make it look like it is appearing while she is reading it.